^MYSTIC^

I stare thru~time and space
with mystic eyes gray-blue
to a mystic's dream place
a realm no one else knows as true

and oh the things I see
on this higher plane
mystical beyond belief
no one else can comprehend

Visions mysteriously vague and intense
to me are innately crystal clear,
perceived as ideal, it makes perfect sense
no one else can scope my sphere

a mysterious awareness beyond this mortal earth
an instinct knowledge unfolds in my mystic dream
such things, I delight as real with a mystic's mirth
the unknowable no one else has ever seen

 

                               

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Very fantastical and mystical. I love the imagery and the wording.

[Lucy Kennedy]

This was truly beautiful. Your words took me away to my own such place. Nice work.

[D Poet K]

lovely, the picture is beautiful too.

[Lyra H]

Beautiful imagery, well done!

[Sheila M]

I love this! Well done!!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very mystical. I enjoyed.

[mysticgmekeepr]

nice, and thanks for the friend invite.
This place you write about in your poem is open to everyone its just not everyone who is interested in partaking of it....if everyone was, it would be a far different world wouldn't it?

[Brianna Brie]

Using your imagination on this one. As I was reading, I was imagining becoming the person behind the eyes, and what it would take to experience life through her eyes. Mystical indeed. Great job.

[WritefromtheHeart]

This is exceptional Fran Marie!! Rhyming poetry is a difficult feat for me...but what you have done with this piece and about such an amazing subject is fabulous!! Oh what she can see...I long to know that 'higher plane" at times ;-)