Dark Cloud

Haiku

 

A dark cloud draws near

      sunlight escapes once again

                   and rain fills my soul

Reviews

[Michael]

The wonderful thing about the dark clouds of life and storms come our way, if you look it is constantly moving and sooner or later it will pass, and the Son will shine again. It takes the storms of life to help make us strong, and to mold us into the person that God wants us to be. Good work.

[Brenda Sue]

I love this, it is a very well done haiku. You are so talented. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i loved this one

[E. M. Murren]

Sigh. Sadly beautiful. So true. Well done.

[Valentine]

This is beautiful..you did very well with so few words..great write...God bless...Valentine

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There is so much depth in just those few sentences. I loved it. The poem is moving and I think it is really good.

[Candle in the wind]

Oh my god just the encircling gloom that threatens to engulf me. Wonderful evocation my friend.