Make A Scene

Don't
just tell
me

Show me
how much
you care.

Lift my spirits from
the dark depths of despair.
make a scene of love appear.

Non verbal communication
Babe, its what
I comprehend the best

and when I say I love you, I really, truly do!
but darlin' I must confess,
that I much rather show you
the love I wish to express

Reviews

[None]

Any communication helps, for sure. It's an important key. Men don't always have the same needs we do and if they only would listen sometimes and bend a to meet our needs. Your poem brings out some valid expectations when it comes to love. Beautifully writtten!

[E. M. Murren]

Lovely!!! Really wonderful work. Actions do speak louder than words. Fine job.

[Candle in the wind]

So true , so very true I did not realize it earlier how painful when actions contradict words. when some one claims that you are special but makes you feel the reverse it is so.....