What Then

` What Then`

 

~Sonnet~

What poet would not write of love, sweet love
The Sun, and the Moon, and the Stars above

What beauty would exist without these things
to gladen, enchanting our hearts to sing
What magic wonderment would fill each night
if not for stars blinking starry bright light
What would tease our curious minds to think
if not for a plump Moon's bestowing wink
What source would enhance happiness and bliss
without sun's golden-orb's glorious kiss
What Rose could grow, void of warm attention
What Romance then, without moonlight's passion

What could light up your eyes as stars above
What Then? ~ would poets write, if not of Love

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

This is beautiful!
Thank you for sharing!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your first place win. Great Job.

[Glee]

Very sweet. But I tried to write about love, I failed. Everything just leaves me confused.

[Tamera L. Noll]

Very Sweet....And Yes...thats all I write about :)

[Emily B]

Lovely, soft and sweet. Your words are beautiful.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

wow this is the most beautiful piece i have read in some time, it shows true emotions and a depth i can understand all too well. it is well written and amazingly wonderful excellent job