Elusive Dream~DBL Acrostic~

 

 

 

Elusive Dream~DBL~Acrostic)

E nvisioning love with you Darling in my lif E
L eaves my soul feeling numb~i cannot fee L
U s, rather me alone~empty arms without yo U
S truggling, when the sunshine of my life fade S
I nto intense darkness,Yes,that is the time when I
V enture aimlessly into the night~ void of your~ lu V
E luding shadows dance, i cannot grasp,where you ar E

D eep clouds of despair in bleak hues tear my eyes now shade D
R endering a crying sun,now stripped of warmth and golden colo R
E ternity merely slips back to the eleventh hour~ It's simply too lat E
Alas~'Twas not meant to be for us, call it fate,or perhaps bad karm A
M y Darling,you are just my~~~~~ E L U S I V E ~~~~~D R E A M

Reviews

[Sarah Junker]

Wow, this is really powerful.

[Emily Paige]

this is really really good I can tell you put some real thought I love the two sides acrostic. amazing job!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning Acrostic!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Fantasic acrostic Fran, I really love it! Admire the double. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest. Debileah

[Frances O'Neill]

Nice theme, double splat! The poem was very nice, too!

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wow..this is amazing a double acrostic ..a perfect write..i like it

[Brenda Sue]

Wow, what a masterpiece. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[None]

Wow! Your double acrostic is a masterpiece to behold! Every line is perfect and meaningful from beginning to end. Although I feel the sadness in your poem, at the same time I am delighted with your writing skills. You really shine with your sad but beautiful writing scheme!