Oozing

 

 

 

Chocolate Eclairs!!

    They're the choice of my affections

                 Oozing with sugar confections

                  tempting my midnight connections

     to which I've no control

              A vice I give no rejection

                 and one that makes me drool

 

Reviews

[Wulfstan Crumble]

None of those cakes are available here in Japan. You do not know how hungry you have made me. I may have to swim the artic ocean again and get back to blighty for some much missed confectionary...flapjacks, jam doughnuts, cream slices, butter buns, shortbread caramel things...

You poem is going to generate a lot of drool. The poem is delicious but buy a mop for us readers.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Mmmm just the pic makes me melt with sugar overload joy yum I liked the sweet short poem thanks 🙏

[Fran Marie]

Mmm me too.. love those sugar treats..
Thanks Julie..much appreciated..

[haymaker14]

Very nice! Yeah, I midnight snack too!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Yummy poem. Congrats on your win.

[Sean M. Addams]

this piece was really sweeeeeeet :) i thought you do a great job on this detail made this picture perfect... overall i liked this alot ...

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

The poem by itself was great and descriptive. And when you added the picture it just makes you think( yummy yummy i want in my tummy)!! Good job i love this.

Danni J

[ShanZ-Turn]

This was so cute, and well written. Loved it, and now i'm hungry, damn.

[Jacqueline]

That picture is criminal! ;) Goes very well with your ode to tasty pastry

[Dark Daughters]

Ok that made me drool and made me miss the bakery we had here in town, great poem

[An Ordinary Woman]

This is 'sweet,' and it made me think about my own late night cravings of which I love so much. I try not to but last night I ate a poptart. It wasn't good enough at all.

I enjoyed this.