Another Time and Place

 

 

I knew you in another time and place

   accepting your bold advances 

       determined to saturate myself

            in your love

 

We shared our sweet journey together

   in valley clover and dancing daffodils

       taking all of life's chances

          throwing caution to wayward winds

 

Absorbing each other's spirit forever

   soulmates by the surrounding shadows

      of the night,chasing down the moon

         til the light of dawn,doing what we chose

 

Right or wrong

    no need for rhyme or reason

      for hard fast rules there was no need

            commiting ev'ry sin doing as we pleased

 

'Alas twas another time and place

      things changed ~there is no reverie

             a deep hush falls now,over what once was

                    ever so silently

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Fran, I really love your presentation of this poem! The visual beauty caught my eye before I even started reading your words.

My favorite lines were:
"We shared our sweet journey together
in valley clover and dancing daffodils
taking all of life's chances
throwing caution to wayward winds"

Nice job!
:-) Sharon

[Tara Jean Olson]

this is my favorite of your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ray Hamilton]

This poem drew the reader right in there with you
Hope you didn't mind the company
I enjoyed this pen Thanks for sharing
Ray { Not a Poet }

[Ashlee]

in the second paragraph change your shaed to shared...then resubmit it...I love it though...It captured my heart........Why did you think that this was good for the contest?

[E. M. Murren]

Such blissfilled beauty. I really liked this. The picture added to the tranquility. Lovely work.