A Heart off Course

`A Heart off Course`

 

Yes the heart is a rage of directions
like a tangled verse in far away dreams
scattered to the winds of imperfection
A heart off course, yielding to evil schemes

Misguided in a state of confusion
mixed emotions spinning out of control
unaligned, 'tis heart and mind's fusion
and rage doth torment the unaware soul

O' what inner peace, would calm the spirit
If heart and mind could meld a compromise
to kill this serpent's rage and doth end it
'Lest the spirit dwells in constant demise

when rage is naught, , heart follows the right path
to true destination,without fate's wrath

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Fran Marie,
A heart off course may be headed down a one way street, racing along on a superhighway, or just cruising along!

I like the way you have captured the many emotions such a state of the heart may produce. When such happens, we must remain hopeful that it will correct the course, and remain steady...if not...well, you have described so much, so well!! Yes, let us keep the rage away!

Another great write!

Hugs, Sheila

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is a very good description of bi-polar, rage and all. Except the mind goes off course rather than the heart. Off course I assume you mean love here and it is true, that makes us crazy too. lol

[Adela Muresan]

Wow. You pictured the inner tempest caused by many types of love in the second strophe perfectly.
This is truely a remarkable piece of writing.
Good write sister, good write.

A.M.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such superb look at how complexed matters of the heart can be... magnificent my friend.

[Phil Sanders]

You create such emotion with your words ... superb....