Too Many Times

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Too many times you done me wrong
too many tearsI've cried
too many times I heard your song'
"Forgive Me" and too many times I tried

Too many times,you left me blue
too many times, you broke my heart
saying you love only me
Too many times,we drifted apart

You just wanted too be free
too many timesI took you back
too many times, I refuse to see
and cut you too much slack

Yes, too many times, I forgave and forgot
and looked the other way
too many times I gave more than I got
too many manys and yet I stayed

Too many times
I've had it , so now I am through,
I have a new life like it or not
and Baby! it Ain't with you!

Reviews

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your words make great job. i have strong feel i am in the poem. it s always sucks when things go wrong direction.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much,for reading and the review

[Mauricio Montoya]

abuse whether physical or mental it's a never ending battle and you've done a great job in bringing all that together in this piece, also the title fits because we're always ready to give another chance and then it starts all over again
excellent write.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Mauricio,much appriciated,

[alesuriko]

In this poem you're missing a lot of spaces. In the second line between tears and I've and a lot of the time after commas, in the third stanza between times and I. For me this poem was lacking for me. Both flow and expression wasn't very strong in my opinion, especially emotional expression. It didn't really do anything for me.

[Ian]

So powerful write!
I love the last lines... They are so full of emotion...
Great write!

[L.G. Knight]

This is great and very different from your normal style I really like it! =) thanks for entering it in the "Let it go" contest!

~Frances~

[M Lamont]

Ahh, heartbreak....a great topic to write about. Loved that it ended with a strong, independent stand!

[lowena]

Good on you.
I really like your poems so keep writing.

Take care

[Imperfection]

Unfortunately this is the story of too many women. But not all of them can gather the strength to move out of the relationship.
Thanks for posting this. I'm sure it will be an inspiration to those who need to put an end to this kind of suffering.

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Nice, very nice, something of a break up deal, lol, if anybody needs one of these, I'll tell' em to come get this poem! Great poem!