The Witch Spell

 

The Witch's Spell

A Wicked Witch did cast a spell.
Of Woe and Grief, to all befell
And from tales of folklore that tell
She did it well~She did it well.

She place the hex yon far and wide
Thru~each small town,and countryside
Folks sought shelter, but only cried
No Place To Hide! No Place To Hide!

Too much power this Witch possessed
The Grief-stricken folks were not blessed
Seeking Solace, they tried their best.
But could not rest~They could not rest.

Mad and Angry they now fought back
To retrieve the peace,they now lacked
They hung her to dry,on a rack
That Witch in black~That Witch in Black


Now the Dead-Witch can do no Spell
and of course their fate turned out swell
And that is that, No more to tell
They did it well~They did it well.
 
 

Reviews

[La Belle Musical]

Bravo! This was very well done, the idea behind it was unique and the way you wrote it was definitly perfect for the idea. The only thing I'd watch out for is your rhyming. A few of those rhymes are quite simple and throw the rhytme off a bit. Other than that good job and keep at it!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A haunting rhyming poem for my contest. I always say if you are going to do something, do it well. I love it when someone does it well.


A Wicked Witch did cast a spell.
Of Woe and Grief, to all befell
And from tales of folklore that tell
She did it well~She did it well.


Now the Dead-Witch can do no Spell
and of course their fate turned out swell
And that is that, No more to tell
They did it well~They did it well.


You did it well!

[With Each Raindrop Come..]

Very well written, CONGRATS ALL 3 OF YOUR ENTRIES MADE FINALIST!

[Sean M. Addams]

very well done ... i love the rhyme in this piece..... great job on this one!!!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully penned. A wonderful write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Celtic Cat]

Gah! Hanging witches AGAIN???? I thought we banned that centuries ago!!!! lol
Good luck in the contest....I won't let my love of witches get in the way of saying: this is cute and fun.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Cute rhyme my friend. You did it well. You did it well!
Love All, Mejasha

[L.G. Knight]

WoWza VERY VERY well done! I love it absolutely adore it thanks so much for entering it in the "Silly Rhymes" poetry competition this is an amzing piece of art!

~Frances~

[lori c]

very fun to read and i imagine it set to music in the fashion of medieval bards. i kinda felt a bit sorry for the witch as she and i are kindred spirits. no matter. the rhythm and storyline are well woven.

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

Very well written.

Victoria Frances is an amazing artist and I think your poem gives life to her art.
You did a great job.

[E. M. Murren]

This almost sings... the rhythm is so strong. It is a fine piece. Harsh on the witch, but they lived happily ever after. LOL Well done.