The Witch Spell

 

The Witch's Spell

A Wicked Witch did cast a spell.
Of Woe and Grief, to all befell
And from tales of folklore that tell
She did it well~She did it well.

She place the hex yon far and wide
Thru~each small town,and countryside
Folks sought shelter, but only cried
No Place To Hide! No Place To Hide!

Too much power this Witch possessed
The Grief-stricken folks were not blessed
Seeking Solace, they tried their best.
But could not rest~They could not rest.

Mad and Angry they now fought back
To retrieve the peace,they now lacked
They hung her to dry,on a rack
That Witch in black~That Witch in Black


Now the Dead-Witch can do no Spell
and of course their fate turned out swell
And that is that, No more to tell
They did it well~They did it well.
 
 

Reviews

[La Belle Musical]

Bravo! This was very well done, the idea behind it was unique and the way you wrote it was definitly perfect for the idea. The only thing I'd watch out for is your rhyming. A few of those rhymes are quite simple and throw the rhytme off a bit. Other than that good job and keep at it!

[Stella]

Wow! The ryhme in your poem is amazing! I loved this poem!

[Baz]

Excellent poem Fran Marie. I love the structure, and your rhyme and meter is spot on. Well done.

[deeps]

Amazing write here, i like this alot

[Wicahpi]

had to give this a reread.
I bet she wasn't even casting wicked spells,
they just presumed she had. who knows though :)
only you. lol i still enjoyed this read.

[123456789]

Awesome, that was great!

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[Eric Cox]

I like your poem. Congratulations on winning second place.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem!

[Andrew'sWonderland]

You really are quite talented!! Wonderful write and Hauntingly Brilliant!!

[We are young.]

nice, I exspecially love the pic. what a beautiful whitch.

[Wicahpi]

"Lest ye remember there are good witches, too"
a fine write, indeed. Yet, it brings back the
memories of Salem. How many innocents died in
the name of such.