Hey you

Hey you

A Poem by Fran Marie

I love your little imperfections
the way you don't
cross you Ts
and then swing those 
off centered dots
on your little I s

spilling your earl grey
tea because your eyes
 are glued to the morning 
news paper ..darting back and forth
 like watching a tennis match.
.trying not to miss the small print

hey you

I love your little perfections
the way you
you see me 
love me ..
everyday
in everyway...
loving my little
imperfections..

your gentle touch
affection ..caring
so much.even when
our journey proves
rough and the road
we travel loses a tad 
more color

and we both lost
our rose colored glasses
along the way

But.. hey you

you're the one that remains true to my
heart..

we're so imperfectly
perfect for each other
because we're as one
synchronized beat 
in time.

© 2020 Fran Marie


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I pray to god and all that's holy that you never ever lose that wonderful feeling dear Fran! what a wonderful thing you just penned and it breathes so very honest to my ear in the lines unfolding beautiful beautiful beautiful poetry:) I must get back to work so this is a great way to exit my reading for the day:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thank you 'thank you' thank you!
dear Robert..have a great day..;



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Sweet very sweet
Love it

I am a firm believer - you only know you truly love someone -
When you sit there - listen - wait - do nothing - say nothing
Even when he is terribly wrong about you - but you are enjoying everything
Instead of rebelling or disliking his flaws - you just smile/laugh -
And watch - Like you are loyal to everything that is him - loyal to a flaw - you would go that far -
Thats beautiful

Love is patient - you captured that here - to the dot -

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thalnks Star.
patient is the key
word when it
comes to love
I appreciat.. read more
i like the way you think fran marie

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Ron..so
much appreciated;
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you`re welcome
I pray to god and all that's holy that you never ever lose that wonderful feeling dear Fran! what a wonderful thing you just penned and it breathes so very honest to my ear in the lines unfolding beautiful beautiful beautiful poetry:) I must get back to work so this is a great way to exit my reading for the day:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thank you 'thank you' thank you!
dear Robert..have a great day..;
This is such a beautiful love poem. It's such wonderful representation of love

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks dear Ana..
I s o appreciate;
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I just love this piece, Fran.
This is like S&G's "Dangling Conversation" without the Dangling happening.
Just a comfortable silence in respect and regard for each other.
This is a love story that is very real.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob
so vey much
for you kind words
glad you enjoyed
this one;read more
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It's a glit but the cover is love; more wanted than gold.
There are plenty who are either insecure about their flaws or think they have to die unloved. I've fallen in love with imperfections many times, objects by far😅 but my love is true. This is a true piece dear Fran🍁

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Tahsin for your
kind words on my
poetry..i s o appreciate;

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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