Deep within

` Deep Within `

 

If I could have access to your mind
deep within and beyond the darkness
you secretly disguise~ I woud delve
right into your soul,to discover if only
the shadows of your thoughts, and the
secrets which they hold

and if I could plant thoughts in your head
you would know how deeply I love you
and how you hold me in the palm of your hand.
you could glimpse into my soul,
and handle gingerly the heart I give to you
as I succumb 'neath your complete control

Even from a distance dear,
you captured the very core of me
and my every sense comes rushing forth
when you draw near
and I'm hoping the feeling is mutual
that you'll give your heart to share

Perhaps we'll toast a glass of Love's
champagne and seal it with a kiss
exploring moments of treasured bliss
A quest of lover's freedom
doing what we wish

If only for a day, a night
you give me your tender Velvet touch
Love is such a gentle thing
in return~ I'll give you twice as much

We could entertain each other's thoughts
with one mind on love so true
If I could plant thoughts in your head
you would know how much I love you
yes, I truly do

Reviews

[None]

Your poem is so giving and loving.
Your words: "If only for a day, a night
you give me your tender Velvet touch
Love is such a gentle thing
in return~ I'll give you twice as much
I'm thinking this is straight from the heart and I hope your requests are answered on the double! I can't begin to tell you just how beautiful this is to me, love poems have that effect on me. I get intoxicated by reading your precious words.

[youngwriter222]

This is so touching because Wwe all have something deep inside espicalloy that we love somebody.
This is a very beautiful poem

[Matt]

This is so touching and plus I think we can all relate to that feeling.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Ahh. That is so beautiful. I hope that your love read and enjoyed this as much or more than I did.
Wonderful write.
I did find one little typo if you wanted to know. Not a big deal.
"woud" I think you mean 'would' unless ther is a word that I don't know. That has happened though. Then you feel really stupid.
Love All, Mejasha

[E. M. Murren]

Exquisite work. It flows beautifully. The message is lovely. Well done.