Shhh ~Valentine

Shhh ~ sugar sweet

don't tell my secret
no one must ever know
that you are my love, true love
and i love you so



Ahhh ~ awesome angel

I have passions and desires
for you fashioned in my
own special style
fanning flaming fires
to make it worth your while



Oohh ~ honey hush

let me love you much with a
touch and such sublime design
fall into my arms and charms
and be my valentine

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Three charming stanzas which tell this reader that someone is very much appreciated and treasured. Your heart overflows with love Fran Marie. A lovely Valentine declaration.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris so very
much appreciate your
kind review on my poetry;

[¿]

Shh the secret is sugar is shugar not cugar hihi, I just noticed that we call sugar "shugar" though we know it's the play of origins and phonetics!
I love your kind of valentines celebration, bounded between two people who love each other and not spread on the whole netizens' world.
~Gotta secret can you keep it
Swear this one you'll save
Better lock it in your pocket
Taking this one to the "paradise!"~
Thanks for sharing this with us dear Fran, a softly sensational read :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tahsin Z.so
very much ..i appreciate
glad you enjoyed 💜

[¿]

I did and you're very welcome Fran! :)

[Relic]

Ahh Fran, I like all three. Each one compliments the other quite well and makes no doubt your romantic intentions.

Well done, my friend. :)