Shhh ~Valentine

Shhh ~ sugar sweet

don't tell my secret
no one must ever know
that you are my love, true love
and i love you so



Ahhh ~ awesome angel

I have passions and desires
for you fashioned in my
own special style
fanning flaming fires
to make it worth your while



Oohh ~ honey hush

let me love you much with a
touch and such sublime design
fall into my arms and charms
and be my valentine

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Dear Fran,
This poem sizzles! It carries such an invitation and promise of passion and love! This would most certainly be the very special poem I'd read to my Valentine! ❤

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Divya
for your kind words
on this one'
I so
appreciate it;

[Nix is typing...]

"Don't tell my secret
no one must ever know
that you are my love, true love
and I love you so"
Dear poet, I think these lines are my favorite. I've been in your shoes, I know the feeling.

100/100

Nix ❤️

[Fran Marie]

a secret love has
it's special moments
so true..thanks Nix
so much for the
read morea secret love has
it's special moments
so true..thanks Nix
so much for the
Kind review;

[Nix is typing...]

it was my pleasure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and sweet words for Valentine day. The day of love need reminders, your sweet heart isn't forgotten. Thank you dear Fran for sharing your amazing poetry for the day of love.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Wish everyday could
be a day of love
wouldn't it be grand
thanks dear John
read moreWish everyday could
be a day of love
wouldn't it be grand
thanks dear John
for your kind review;

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear Fran and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

Your overzealous valentine poem reminds me of when we used to have secret valentines which we obsessed upon -- all the mental/emotional gyrations were many times amplified, compared to the typical end result (kind of a letdown) . . . a shy blushing "thanks" & then the object of our obsession skitters off. Haven't been in a "Valentine" mood but your poem makes me want to try one! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie so
very much for your
kind review ..almost
time for Cupid to
read moreThanks Margie so
very much for your
kind review ..almost
time for Cupid to
shoot those love
arrows our way lol
glad you might catch
one of those love moods

[Mauricio Montoya]

Happy Valentine times Fran, love the write and miss the times we would exchange thoughts when we shared from heart, the poem was a wonderful touch. Thank You. hope to cross your path.

[Fran Marie]

Hi Maurico
g ood to hear
hear from you
again ..thanks
for reading and
the review I so
appreciate;

[Patricia Wedel]

A Sweetheart 's Valentine... when love entwines...
a Song of dancing flowers with notes that play
so tenderly... as on your wedding day. tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

thanks Pat for
your lively poetic
comments I so
appreciate it;

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

The idea of a secret love does have its way of being a steamy romance. But even when everyone knows, there are still ways of keeping things fun in the relationship. But I love the write.

[Fran Marie]

thanks lilcupcake
secret or not love
is love
s o vey much appreciate
your kind review..

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

That is true. Haha :)

[light and ashes]

Sultry and sweet. Nice work.

[Fran Marie]

thanks light
I s o appreciate

[light and ashes]

You are so welcome.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very sexy write. A hidden love is always so hot

[Fran Marie]

yep sizzling hot
lol..thanks Dale;
s o very much

[Crowley]

Secret admirers, behind the scenes crush...clandestine rendezvous. We place a lot of emphasis on the hot and romantic end of them...knowing full well that they may lead to disaster. But what the hey...the poets understand and blast it form the loudspeakers for all to hear. Nice work girl!!!

[Fran Marie]

poets indeed do
understand and
so we write ....
thanks Crowely
I s o apprecite