you're so smooth babe

you're so smooth babe

A Poem by Fran Marie
"

Senryu

"



feeling in our groove

a new year for sweet lovin'

make the right moves babe

© 2020 Fran Marie


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straight to the point this is.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago


thanks so very much;
can't argue with that. perhaps we should all have this tattooed for the coming year. good stuff fran ... :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks Pete.s o vey much appreciate your
kind reviews;
  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks Pete.s o vey much appreciate your
kind reviews;
This is the number one thing everyone could be doing better & you've expressed it in a way that makes a person want to be there & soak it in (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Hi Margie..I so agree we all should try to do better this year..good luck with your book and thanks .. read more
ahahahaha ... i put this new years resolution at the top of me list hon! ;) may we all "make the right moves" ... i appreciate you putting this in such an ancient and respected form as well ... giving it a light hearted update says i! top o' the mahrnin' to ya Fran!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

yeah babe ..lol..throwing babe in there to for a modern touch to the form...thanks for your kind rev.. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

Amen sister! Amen! :)
Lol,hope she does
New year love

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

Thanks Mr.2five for stopping by to read
much appreciated;
lol,i am arent i ?.....................

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

lol..you are . you are..thank you Ron.
 wordman

4 Years Ago

lol,i couldn`t resist
Just my feeling this year, dear Fran. The stage is set, the lights are on and the right moves will take us there. A very romantic offering and one that will be irresistible!

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

many thanks dear Divya..I do appreciate;
AYVID N

4 Years Ago

You're welcome Fran... :)
a serenely romantic offering here.
nice way to start the New Year...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Years Ago

thanks Jacob .. s o appreciate your words;

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

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