He was....

He was poet
he was
he was poetry
he was poor
he was rich
he was..

he was summer spent sunlight
and winter worn
with weathered wrinkle skin
he was autumn
ample abundance
and spring smiles ..
special and sumptuous
he was ..

he was first
and last and
In between
he always was..

he was midnight bourbon
stirred with passion pouring
..a potion of which I tasted
he was cigarette smoke mixed with desire
...a torrid heat which I inhaled

he was nothing
he was everything
he was poetry

he was
.yes ..he was

and. we were. harmony
we were.
yes~we were

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Few realize that Free Verse poetry is not simply talking, far beyond and deeper than prose, that it must contain metaphor, emotion, imagery, creative imagination, flow, poetic voice … intriguing, image-laden artwork, too.

But, none of that escaped you … in fact, there's so much more you've laid between the lines and "he was" refrains for one to become lost to -- merely in the innuendos of passion, romance, longing, harmonious rhythms, the floating sense of sensuality that almost intoxicates the senses ⁓ yes, you were.

Here's one that'll hang-on for awhile … wink* 'n a smile, oh-MY!
Thanks again, Fran Marie ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Richard. for your in depth
review..i. s o appreciate your
thoughts and kind words on my.poetry

[Richard🖌]

I'm proud to be a fan. : )

[Fran Marie]

No worries ..
Its a picture off the internet
but no name was on it
it's about someone very
real a long time ago

[Relic]

Dream number 9 was always one of my favorite songs. It brings back memories along with imagine. Great words about him here, Fran.

[Fran Marie]

Not familiar with that song
who sins it? I'll look it up
thanks Tim for your kind review on my poetry

[Relic]

Oh wow, I thought this was about John Lennon. My bad. That's his picture in the avatar. :)

[Fran Marie]

No worries..its about
someone dear to me
I knew a long time ago
I just use a random picture
Off the internet it didn't have a name lol

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the complete poem dear Fran.
"he was nothing
he was everything
he was poetry"
We need people to excite our mind, our soul. I liked the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

yes; we do indeed
Thanks John for your thoughts on this one..

[Chris Shaw]

Deeply felt tribute to someone who was everything and more. Beautiful free verse Fran Marie. Expertly conveyed.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris so very
much..i so appreciate;

[Chris Shaw]

My pleasure:)

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem. I enjoyed it a lot.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you JungLee
I appreciate it;

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome

[mattavelli]

Hello, Fran! :)
He was a special man. This is beautiful passionate poetry. Thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Matt for reading
I so appreciate

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... your poetry has touched me deeply,
as I live with a gentle person who is so much like your words...
there never will be anyone quite like him so quietly kind. gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Pat
s o much for your
thoughts and kind
words on my poem
much appreciated;

[Cherrie]

This may be my favorite poem of yours. It's soulful and enchanting.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Cherrie
for reading..
I appreciate;

[Vari]

"Love the way like your fondness do express in poem". WOW :), Every line passing show more passionate love for your lover. Unconditional yet so beautiful like a magic. Glad to read.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Vari
s o very much
yes love can
Indeed be magical
I appreciate your
kind words;

[Vari]

Honor to read this Pat.

[AJNJ]

This is such fabulous free-verse poetry and I love it absolutely! To me it speaks of all things poetry and in poetry, all things desirable and awesome. Those things that leave on us their scent, their touch and their inspiration. You have created a wonder here with your pen, Ms. Fran. Kudos!

[Fran Marie]

thanks ever so
AJ. for such
a lovely review
I appreciate
your kind words
on m y poetry;

[AJNJ]

It was a true pleasure, Ms. Fran!

[Rick Puetter]

This was beautiful, Fran. You can only write something like this when you feel an encompassing loss, and look back on what once was, but is no more.

[Fran Marie]

Hi Rick, nice
to see you back
at wc.its been awhile
hope you are doing well
read moreHi Rick, nice
to see you back
at wc.its been awhile
hope you are doing well

thanks s o much
for your kind review
I so appreciate;

[Rick Puetter]

Thanks, Fran. I am not fully back at WC. I was just visiting. But I did enjoy your poem. All my best.