Island

deserted.. i'm here..
alone and
feeling the pain..

wishing to float away
to that better place
falling into your arms..
feeling your heartbeat

hearing the laughter inside your voice
sharing the dream within your heart.

.if only
you would hear my distant call

I'd scale each mountain
I'd cross the sea

just to be with you

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i feel the lonely in this ... perfect title and fine use of the metaphor .. could be longing for one lost or one hoped to find .. the memories stirred in me are of the later ... as want, desire and need went unfulfilled at the time those feelings were at their height ... funny how letting go and knowing lonely and alone are not the same can suddenly materialize that one we have been missing ;) very emotive, well thought out says i ..touches me

[Fran Marie]

Thanks E for your thoughts and
kind words o n my poetry..i ever
so appreciate it;

[Jasnil Chand]

Really liked this..
Was simple and elegant

[Fran Marie]

Thank s Jasnil
for your review;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a lovely, romantic poem....a Castaway wishing she could get back to the civilization of love....
j.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Jacob.
.s o ever much appreciate
your kind words: