vaguely familiar

taken aback by
a potpourri of deja vu..
an aphrodisiac of jasmine
and sensual scents

yes, oh yes

I've been here before.

wrapped up in your warmth

feeling your touch..tasting desire.. and
so much more

we laughed,loved
and danced beneath moonlight
with each kiss of bliss connecting the stars
perfecting our love

all this ever so

vaguely familiar

yes, oh yes
I've been here before

and here we are again

Reviews

[Jibey]

This conjured up such a delightful air of romance and pleasure - and the key phrase 'a potpourri of deja vu' showed a perceptive understanding that sometimes we go through the pleasures of 'jasmine and sensual scents' while at the same time feeling it is a kind of ritual.

The trailing structure supported this feeling of detached reflection.. and I wanted to go there again.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jibey..so much appreciate your kind comments on my poem

[Fay Slimm]

Great lead into the sensual togetherness you so well describe Fran - and with metaphors to sigh for - a nostalgic feel to the poem took me back moons ago.......... loved every line of this deja-vu............. Fay

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Fay ever so much..I appreciate. your your review on my poetry;

[Karmee]

such a lovely write here, your words are beautiful

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks kitseth..I so appreciate

[Neville]

What a lucky pair you are and beautifully captured moments such as these are a rare delight and a real treat........... Neville

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville ever so much..appreciate your words on my poetry;

[Neville]

a pleasure always.... and mine too which makes it even better..

[Wondering Mind]

What a lovely deja vu..

‘with each kiss of bliss connecting the stars
perfecting our love’...these kisses are rare and can never be forgotten

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks wondering mind..glad you stopped by to read..ever so much appreciate..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the title...and the sensuality of the poem...but the imagery is far from vague...the memories high definition...and when it seems we have been here before...oh, wow, yes, we have been.
got caught up in this one...remembered a certain person reading this...made me smile to think of her.
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob..so very much for your kind words. and thoughts on my poem..so appreciate

[Chris Shaw]

Scents can really stimulate memories. Can evoke the emotions and make one reflect on past experiences. I like where your sensual lines took me Fran Marie. Took me down pathways I had visited before.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris..so much appreciate your kind review..I so appreciate..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very sensually romantic freeverse that begins with a lovley stanza filled with palpable aromas and takes us through the emotions of one dedicated to the physical and psychological union with a lover.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John..ever so much appreciate your words on my poetry..