Cursing the Winds

Cursing the Winds

A Poem by Fran Marie

you're the devil
In my details
darker than my heart.
I'm your night angel stealing
a lone soul in the dark..
asking for naught...
not a thing have I to gain..
I curse the wicked winds
which keep whispering your name..

© 2019 Fran Marie


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sorry for my interpretation presented below. i liked this :)

the word "you're" implies an other, therefore a relationship, particularly with a devil, or an antagonist. "in my details" suggests the other could be one's self-consciousness and self-critique. to battle this the narrator becomes an angel, who's tool is ironically cursing. the narrator doesn't want anything but to lose this devil or devilling thoughts. the "wicked winds" are the damn thoughts that keep blowing in. i'm quite curious what the name actually is.

thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Mondaine for your words and thoughts on my poetry..ever so appreciated;



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Amazing use of words. A complete story in your words. Left the reader with the desire to read and know more. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!!! So very awesome, much enjoyed this write

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sounds like a case of someone hung up on someone else. If bad vibes persist, tell the winds to shut up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

haha..yeah I will...thanks John so vey much ..I appreciate your words on my poem;
memories...waking alone, the wind's whisper sounding like his whispers in the night.
her heart he stole..and now she still hears and feels him close even in her solitude.
haunting write, Fran,
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

yes..kind of like that..thanks Jacob ever so much for your words..I appreciate;

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