February

Haiku

^February^


February stands

Determined to stay frozen

No breaking the ice

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

This poem captures the feeling that winter never seems to end, the world is frozen.

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful haiku...thought provoking , being said with a few words. Excellent.

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, and this has become a prophetic word, Fran! You breathe out a passage that drifts with white all around us... and causes one to long for March...

[Brianna Brie]

Very cool....I can feel the chill in my toes.

[Dinesh Sairam]

Nice haiku. Extra credits for (un)intentionally writing in perfect rhythm. Keep writing.

[DanaRegen]

Short and sweet! Beautiful poem Fran!
hugs from,
Dana :)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I love this haiku, it's just so beautiful. Wonderful write!!!

Heather