Autumn's Amber

Narure

Autumn's amber
dresses me
in golden glee
. within a forest free.
such heavenly harmony

One with wilderness
as I wander
. wondering what next
shall I see .
a squirrel. scurrying

up and down a tree.

A docile deer .a robin and a honeybee
. a lovely lone owl rushes down
and around. to greet me
..and my own spirit tells a tale

these things are meant to be

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Autumn's Amber'
Fran Marie,
A rhythmic and comforting spin of beauty in your above words was so lovely to read!
Between the thoughts of a hike through a green fragrant forest and it's creatures
to the fragrances all around I found myself identifying with you in rambles in woods myself.
' Squirrels are fascinating. Bees, robins and deer.'
Nice last line:
"A lovely lone owl rushes down
and around to greet me
and my own spirit tells a tale
these things are meant to be."
I agree with you most definitely!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Kathy So vey. Much..I so appreciate your. Kind words dear friend

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I appreciate your appreciation..ha ha. Your so cute too. Your voice is helpful and thought provoking. Please do not stop!
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for Autumn. I like the season of the Fall. So much change to be seen. I loved your use of description. I could see your words in vision and my thoughts. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John..So very much appreciated..☺

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Amanda Trerotola]

I loved the imagery in your poem. It made me feel like I was there!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks So very much Amanda..glad you enjoyed

[LazerRays]

A beautiful poem! I loved the effort and words that just flowed together. I could sing it. Nice job!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Sarah..for reading..glad you enjoyed

[Chris Shaw]

It is certainly a beautiful time of year Fran and I enjoyed my walk with you in the forest. I appreciated the colour you brought to this poem and the wildlife too. An uplifting read. Thank you.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks Chris..so glad you enjoyed..

[Cherrie Palmer]

Wandering spurs our compulsion to see around the unseen

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks Cheerie.I so appreciate it..

[Papaya]

this is an enchanting scene, maybe not meant to be written for children but it has that innocence and wonder that would capture a child's imagination.

[Fran Marie]

Yes..I suppose it does....I see what you mean..thanks ever do much for reading

[Nolo Segundo]

Hi Fran! It's been a while since I've said hello-- like this poem a lot-- it's a lovely song to my favorite season!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Nolo.for reading...always glad for your visits ..fall is my favorite season also....

[Patricia Wedel]

Some things are meant to be... a honey bee 🐝
and a Chickadee... autumn’s amber beads upon my breast... I dance 💃 in red and gold leaves 🍁... your poetry has set me free to fly with the wind. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Your comments are poetry in itself .thank you pat for your Lovely words on this poem..truly appreciate d

[Neville]

Don't ya just love it.. you can beat an egg, and ya can beat a carpet, but ya can't beat a bit of nature can ya... especially in the fall... perfectly penned and with a golden glow.. N

[Fran Marie]

Yes Autumn is.awesome you can't beat it..thanks ever so much Neville..

[Neville]

always a pleasure, and invariably mine...