November's Song

Simple things of Nature

Abundance~ yet small
simple beauty beckons me
earth's precious moments

Birds sing ..leaves falling
Winds breathe cold grey raindrops fly
still flames glow with warmth

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhhh i love this haiku in two ;) such a plain and simple glorious scene ..i can feel the cold rain flying ..smell the wind breathing .. feel its touch .. and those really cool days of late fall when the sun makes it to ones face .. i love love love this one Fran! well done!
E.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks E..ever so much appreciate your thoughts and review on this one

Glad you enjoyed...

[Chris Shaw]

A second visit, and well worth it Fran for the lovely late autumn imagery and colour. Good luck in the contest.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris so very
much appreciated;

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... the November winds blow golden leaves 🍁 with red kisses to the ground where a carpet of tenderness rests as smiles for awhile. Blue Jays fly ... 🔬 and swoop down to the ground... discovering a blanket of compassion where colors still mend the broken wing. Your poetry inspires and is a gift beyond compare. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Patricia for such a sweet review..I so appreciate your kind words..on my poetry

[Chris Shaw]

That sounds and feels very much like November days to me. The silver birch outside my window still has an abundance of gold leaves to fall and the acer of my neighbour is burning flame red. Nice lines Fran.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Chris..i so appreciate your reviewing my poetry

[Chris Shaw]

I will make a point of calling more often :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Fran. Winter had found Michigan. Snow and cold days are here. Amazing use of description. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John so. vey much..winter is upon us also in Kentucky. Though no snow yet...

[Coyote Poetry]

It is coming and you are welcome dear Fran.

[Jibey]

Simple and heart-warming, a reminder that the embers of summer still glow in the Autumn.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jibby.for your kind review...always appreciated

[Papaya]

i think this is lovely, a reminder that beauty is all around us. we just need absorb it

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Ana ..always appreciate your kind words..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this poem a lot because i like the simple things in life...and see beauty in other things besides material accumulation.

nothing like a beautiful pile of maple leaves...beats a pile of cash any day in my book.

j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob .so much for your thoughts on this one...glad you enjoyed..

[Neville]

November encapsulated in a fallen red leaf envelope... simple as that...:) N

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville..I so. appreciate your reading and reviewing my poetry ..

[Neville]

I so enjoy doing so.. and true.. N