Coo

Haiku

softly I whisper
oh darling..you're cool I coo
my love In your ear

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I can't remember EVER feeling that a haiku/senryu was PLAYFUL like this! I love how you made this into a dynamic interaction . . . very unexpected & fun (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Cooing is cool and playful fun. Thanks Margie for reading.and your review. On my poetry .

[Neville]

Coo is the new caw and cool is the new hot.. in my book anyway.. cor this is hot... N

[Fran Marie]

No harsh cool cawing.. just hot soft cooing ..thanks Neville for reading . and reviewing..

[Neville]

just the way I like it... tis always a pleasure visiting you Fran.... N x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the last line...

i want headphones to keep the love from escaping.

[Fran Marie]

I don't blame you.. Cooing love words are so sweet.thanks Jacob..so vey much.☺.

[Papaya]

a lovely haiku of love's coo
tickles the ear :)

[Fran Marie]

Yes.. it does tickle and more..thanks so much for reading☺

[Jibey]

Coo! Cool and hot all in one. I love whispers in the ear.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jibby..so much.for .the cool revire on my coo poem. I so appreciate..☺