Red Leaf

Haiku

Red Leaf

Alive with color
Slowly dying like the rest
Without redemption

Reviews

[Jade]

AWESOME!! write here, love Haiku's
they have so much impact

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks Brandie ..much appreciated

[Cherrie]

I love the power packed haiku. They are elegant and electrifying. Like you they always deliver.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Cherrie..for reading..I so appreciate..

[barleygirl]

Your poof of insight reminded me how melancholy it can be when our brightest moment is just before we fade away *sigh!* Nicely visual & thought-provoking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Margie. So much .I always appreciate your kind words..

[Papaya]

we can draw some parallels between leaves and people I think.
I think we are our most vibrant in our adult years when we are settled, stable and happiest and then slowly fade away

[Fran Marie]

So true..thanks Ana..I so appreciate your reviews on my poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words dear Fran. It is sad when the leave turn to red and fade. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Yes ..sad to see the leaves fade away.
.Thanks John..for your kind words..
9much appreciated..

[Neville]

Ah' but she was noticed amongst all those green and golden ones... and now, the memory of her will live on.... a lovely little write and true.... Neville

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville..I took that picture in my back yard after a heavy rain the other day .and noticed the one red leaf laying on top of the wet dead grayish-- brown ones

[Neville]

Haiku for the explanation Fran, tis a lovely pic and a fine little oriental themed write... N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

leaves do die...but these leaves represent people...when the color fades we become dead brown shells of what we were...and we can only hope our souls will be blown upward toward a good place.
this is concise and yet expands our thinking.
j.

[Fran Marie]

Yes..so vey true..thanks for reading and the kind words.Jacob..ever so appreciate..

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Very vividly pictured in my mind. A fate like the rest. Like all of us. Yet think of the beauty it brought to the world!

[Fran Marie]

Yes ..all all things and people inenviably come to an end..Many thanks...i so appreciate your review on my poetry