``Rush``

Senryu Set

 

 

 

 

 

Ravished in romance

 lost in lover's timeless frame

no rules need apply

tonight, i feel the rush
as you draw me to your arms
passionate desire

overthrows control
and once again,shattered plans
don't shatter sweet dreams

in the making,as
love takes hold of troubled woes
of bygone days spent

disagreeing views
now disappear to new dreams
that really come true

yes,tonight is free
you're the one,second to none
for me,you're my rush!

 
 

  

 

 

 

 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 
 
 

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

Some nice sentiments here, but this really isn't a haiku - which are supposed to be about spirituality and/or nature. This is a senryu.

Thanks for sharing :)

[Jenny Davis]

Simple emotions, very nice...yet this is a senyru and not a haiku...thought I'd let ya know ;)