Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[Laura E. Aranda]

This is fantastic

[Czardas]

Gorgeous poetry.

[Wildfleour]

Just lovely, Fran. My favorite write of yours!

[D Poet K]

beautiful poem

[Flow]

This one is wonderful indeed, I love the flow of it and how it implies the power of the pen in poetry. Excellent job!

[Phil Sanders]

What a lovely poem .. charming...

[The Outlaws' Song]

So romantic and so sweet.Absolutely beautiful and captivating!!!!
It made my imagination sing and float:)

[Candle in the wind]

The very title captivates attention bringing to mind the indelible imprint of love...beautiful poem!Best of luck for the contest.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this is such a beautiful piece of writing... nicely done