Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[Indra Neil]

wow! superb imagery in this excellently crafted write! kudos *claps*

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Indra, so much appreciated..

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[anonymous]

I loved this poem! The words flow so well and it made a beautiful piece of art. Thank you so much for sharing!

[Chain of Hearts]

Beautiful. I can't even say enough words. Spectacular

[Fran Marie]

Thsnk you..so. much appriciated

[Chain of Hearts]

No problem :)

[Chain of Hearts]

And please, take a look at some of my poems and stories too :)
Thanks

[wordman]

a wonderful profound write and all the views you have outstanding

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Ron, much appriciated

[wordman]

you are welcome,was up late last night so I read poetry saw yours on live feed

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Very beautiful piece ! ..a rhythmic expression of love and i liked the title very much "Tattoo my Soul" certainly it holds a love for poetry

"So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again."

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Lenah,so very much appriciated,

[Patricia]

Wonderful, romantic, love the rhythm, it flows so soft and smooth and very feminine.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Patricia, so vey much;

[Patricia]

Your welcome.

[RAOrourke]

Such beautiful, lyrical words that just seemed to flow from your pen. Very nice pacing and rythem throughout the poem. Very nice job.

[Madison O'Dwyer]

Congratulations on winning my poetry contest with this submission. It is a fantastic and eloquent piece and I so enjoyed reading it. The poem is consistently strong with a graceful conclusion, the rhyme scheme was subtle, and the imagery is picturesque. All together it was perfection.
As a side note, I might suggest that you rethink your capitalisation within the stanzas as it is not needed.

Nevertheless, wonderful! Thank you for submitting it, and sharing your words with me. I felt privileged.

[Barbara Walker]

I love this poem, Fran. It's going in my favorites. Love your syntax, rhythm and flow. Great subject matter!

[ApplesAreAmazing]

Great poem! I'm glad you won the Soulful Poets contest. Congratulations!