Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[Ben LR]

This just tattooed me with its poets pen... Wow! Reading this was sensational. Quite inspirational too and really grips you the whole time. Incredible!

[Fran Marie]

thanks Ben..ever
s o much appreciate
your words..glad
your enjoyed;

[Mirajane Strauss]

I can't believe I am reading this so late...
I had no idea there could be anything so beautiful and profound. The first line just...captured me and now I can't let go.
This is an amazing piece of writing and I absolutely love it.

[Fran Marie]

thanks marajane
I'm glad you enjoyed this one..ever so much
appreciate your kind
read morethanks marajane
I'm glad you enjoyed this one..ever so much
appreciate your kind
words..💙

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Lovely homage for the soft sizzle of the quill which quickeneth the countenance of readers one and all.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks ..so very much appreciate it..

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

My pleasure Fran Marie

[Nolo Segundo]

Lovely, very, very lovely

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much.

[preoccupied]

The flow of this poem is just so mesmerizing.

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

The whole poem is just so beautifully written but those lines stuck out the most to me. Your phrasing choices were wonderful.

A lovely piece. Well done.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much.. I appreciate your kind words

[FateDictates]

this left me spellbound by the beauty of this work..curtsy bow to you

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, glad you enjoyed;

[Roland Petrov]

As if "Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen" wasn't enough, you came up with "Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me". Those are two awesome lines!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks for reviewing, Roland, glad you enjoyed this ;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a nice call for love...to be tattooed by the pen, with free verse or rhyme? as long as love is in the lines!

the designs are wonderful...cupid's cup a chance to overflow with ink.

j.

[Fran Marie]

Yes, let the love ink flow in free verse or rhyme..thanks so much , Jacob;

[Cassie]

This is one of the loveliest mindblowing poems i have read today. No wonder the 8 libraries.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Caddie,so vey much appriciated...

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Wow Fran, this is beautifully written. The words, "tattoo my soul" are so deep and feel so personal to the reader. This could sit beside some of the best poems we studied in literature class in school.

[Fran Marie]

Hi Damien, thanks for reading and for such a high praised review..ever so much appriciate it..

[Damien Thibodeaux]

You're welcome, my friend.