Broken Tape

Senyru

can't rewind your life
like old black and white movies
once you add drama

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh...so much drama locked into this one :) We all face drama from time to time - that's life, though there is a category of person who tends to cause their own drama - on top of what life might send their way. Hard to point that out though...:)

Great poetry.

[Fran Marie]

So true.
.thanks so vey much for reviewing my poetry

[Misterr Remeat]

interesting way
to use a film metaphor
it does make one think

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much for reviewing..

[Misterr Remeat]

My Pleasure!

[LazerRays]

Wow. This is something to ponder on :D

[Fran Marie]

Thanks. Sarah..so much appreciatd..

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Very deep words Fran Marie. Ugly words especially stick like broken and sticky tape. A cleverly done, vivid kind of senryu.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Dhara so vey much for reading..I appreciate it..

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

You’re welcome Fran Marie.

[emmajoy]

Neat as neat can be, precise, restrained.. and yet, oh so true. No return, can't re.wind. But lessons learned, memories stored or deplored. Whatever between happening and this moment, time shows a different dimension, perhaps. You've always touched heart and mind, Fran.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much Emmajoy.for the review on my poetry..

[Papaya]

I can almost see the tape unravelling when the drama hits.
and you can pick it up and wind it back up but you can't smooth out the wrinkles.
they're permanent

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Ana..I so appreciate

[Junayed]

Right. it's small but deepest.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is so true...i really like the idea of this, but even more so, i love the use of black and white movies...
they are so classic...and are long gone...we can never go back to the way it was, can we?

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob ..unfortunately we can not..

[Lyn Anderson]

As much as we sometimes think we would, most of us actually wouldn't

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Lyn.. I so appreciate

[barleygirl]

Very thought-provoking & also a fresh way to arrange these familiar imagery phrases! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much for reading..Much appreciated