A Distant Lovesong

`` A Distant Lovesong ``

 

Darling, you're my winner
perhaps my loser too
but then, love is a gamble
and all my bets ride on you.

Baby, Life being the mystery
Which some people say it is
Leaves me willing to stake a claim
and therefore, place my bid.

And honey. with you
'Tis where I choose to be
So step into this heart of mine
and throw away the key
We'll take it one step at a time
and dance our love into eternity.

Know this to be true my dear
You're like a recorded song
one which plays over and over again
in which we both belong

Yes, A Distant Lovesong
singing out your name
Echoing thru~ a Whispering Wind
Amidst a Misty~Midnight Rain.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a very beautiful piece with true feelings...
very good indeed...
I really like these lines a lot..
"Yes, A Distant Lovesong
singing out your name
Echoing thru~ a whispering wind
amidst a misty~midnight rain.
""--Beautifully written..

A poetry with a good feel and meaning..

Thanks a lot for sharing it here!

[Riverdance]

This is how love aught to be, indeed. Very inspirational.

~RD

[Lydia Shutter]

Magical and majestic love poetry, Fran. Wonderful! Lydia

[Where the night sky and..]

its beautiful and touching simple and inspiring. Wonderful job

[Pema Dorje]

a lyrical ode and one you sing, with all your Heart does bring and then we read as Lovers do, cherishing each moment so ... lovely write, Fran the last stanza is a wisp