Gypsy Woman

My tarot  cards hold destiny. lines in hands tell

   your story.. Ripe as mango  fruit sweet juice of

life flows from within your veins

 you stand on the ridge of golden years

 as an army of angels play

the angelical music of the harp.

perhaps the cards show no kindness

yet it is necessary to be truthful than to

say there is much hope in future relations

of any kind.. no residual love awaits ,,,

I see these things for I am that Gypsy Woman

          

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks.. so very much appreciated

[pierced_rebel]

This piece reminds me of my aunt. She is what I always picture when I think of a "gypsy women." She burns sage to keep ghosts away and back in the day, she wore flowly pants and tie dyed shirts and played her guitar for dimes and nickels in the park, she smoked weed and didn't settle down in one place or marry or have kids. She was truly a free spirit. Thank you for sharing this.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much.. your aunt sounds like she had fun beinng a free spirit.. glad you enjoyed..

[MysteriousAries]

Described so well... The first stanza is so poetic, the second connects well... I like it over-all...

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much;

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this the imagery is great

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much 😀

[Moonie]

It's funny...I have just written a piece about a gypsy woman only now...and I found this on my feed...really vibrant and colorful imagery, ma'am...I found the phrase "ridge of golden years" very striking....if you hadn't underlined those words, I would never have imagined that it was for a contest, given the fluidity of the piece.......cheers!

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Moons fairest, so very much for reviewing.. yes it was a contest for ten given words..glad you enjoyed..

[APOORVA]

your story.. Ripe as mango fruit sweet juice of
life flows from within your veins
you stand on the ridge of golden years
WHAT ALLURING WORDS, WOW :)
LOVED EVERY BIT OF THIS PIECE OF ART

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much, Apoora, for reviewing my poetry..glad you enjoyed

[Kush]

This is a nice one
Gypsy woman- interesting write.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much...

[Sean M. Addams]

very enchanting... overall i thought you did a great job on this.. nice work

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Sean so vey much..i so appreciat..☺

[Sean M. Addams]

NO PROBLEM

[Riley Justine]

I love the imagery in this poem! Really well written piece!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Riley so much appreciated

[Valentine]

I loved this one...good flowing piece. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Kathy; so very much..