Gypsy Woman

My tarot  cards hold destiny. lines in hands tell

   your story.. Ripe as mango  fruit sweet juice of

life flows from within your veins

 you stand on the ridge of golden years

 as an army of angels play

the angelical music of the harp.

perhaps the cards show no kindness

yet it is necessary to be truthful than to

say there is much hope in future relations

of any kind.. no residual love awaits ,,,

I see these things for I am that Gypsy Woman

          

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

really interesting piece of work here. I love your use of words and the overall lingo of the piece as it really accentuates the topic. I also really appreciate the way you conveyed the difficulties of the gypsy woman where sometimes her reading may bring unpleasant results but its better to stick to the truth rather that to comfort the hearts of the one being read as its always hard to deliver bad news. Very well done. And keep up the good work.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks.. so very much appreciated

[light and ashes]

This is fun................

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jazzy... being of Hungarian descent I love Gypsy music and gold jangles and rings. I am on the ridge of golden years and I often hear music of the Harp as though angels guard me day and night. I love the juice of Mango... sweet as my lovers blue eyes. You have touched my heart a la carte... May your Spirit remain thusly.... truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Hi Pat..who is Jazzy? This is Fran
I thank you for your. Lovely review..I love the gypsies also..their music soothes my soul. I so appreciate your visit and comments on my poetry..

[Neville]

A fascinating personal introduction to a subject I must confess intrigues me, and has done for many years..Actually, I have a dear friend Clive who used to read the Tarot Cards... He did in fact read my wife's and told her she would eventually marry a blue eyed and very handsome Sagittarian... that was three weeks before she first met me... He also told her many other things that came true... He declined to read mine because by then, he knew too much about me.... All true except the bit about me being handsome.. honest............. Many thanks Jazzy........... Neville

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville so vey much for reading..the cards were kind for your wife then..

[Neville]

The read was certainly a pleasure..

[Ivory]

Very creative piece. Love the word play.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much

[UN]

Who is the gypsy woman? So mysterious. I love gypsies personally. A really good piece

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much

[DaughterNature]

I think this piece is interesting and has a lot of potential, but it doesn't feel "finished" to me. I think the first thing you need to do is decide why you break your lines where you do. The words that begin and end lines receive extra emphasis, and don't underestimate the power of putting a word or phrase on a line by itself.

[Patrick Ramsey]

At first a sweet, then an uncomfortable poem. Cautionary, or maybe just blunt about "the cards" and life. I think you mean something by the diminishing fot and underlines, but I am too thick to figure it out. She leaves me with a bad taste, and yet I find myself wanting to defy her and prove her wrong!!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks.. the underlining is simply one of the rules for contest entry..of ten words given..

[An owl on the moon]

With each line you give glimpses into a deeper world, a world of sacred secrets. The words and soul of her entice one to come into the light of her revelation. When I was young I met such a gypsy girl with her tarot cards. Was pulled away just as she was revealing my path. You made me wonder what if.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much..for reading i so appreciate ..

[Poetic Beauty]

This is intriguing and well crafty. Who hold our fate? The card? Love the feel and the description in this piece

[WoodenChair]

Does fate exist? aren't we really just a simulation?

Consider the quantum mechanics and the double slit experiment, an electron interferes with itself resulting in an interference pattern, which means the particle must have travelled through both slits interfering with itself and forming the interference pattern... But (and this is where fate becomes questionable) when observed the particle acts like a wave and forms a double slit pattern!!

it's like it's experienced both in a parallel universe simultaneously, and transverses between them and interfered with itself... it's mind blowing to think of alternate realities!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks poetic beauty..for reading.. in this poem the tarot cards hold the fate.. but in reality who really knows? Who controls our fate may depend on a persons belief system.. the only fate/ destiny for certain is our utimate death.and even then we still don't know. The when where and how..

[Poetic Beauty]

I agree with you on this thought.

[WoodenChair]

I believe our existence is for the simple purpose of the conservation of energy.

Think of a tree, a tree takes electromagnetic energy (sunlight) and stores it in it's fruit, the apple, thus conserving energy.

We humans eat the apple, transferring it's energy, thus further conserving energy, we're like an efficiency engine, so we should really dedicate our lives to conserving as much electromagnetic energy as possible

[Einstein Noodle]

interesting to read ...editing is all over the place ...me thinks on purpose ..really think the trailing off of thought and font in closing is effective and creative ... very different ... but it is after all .. the Gypsy Woman! ;))
E.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Eistein so. Very much.. yes the font variation was for effect and also this was a using ten cerrain words contest..rules..

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhh! :)