Illusions

Dark Poetry

 Hazy moonlight stretched across the night sky
as I gazed from my window at a starless night
I percieved visions~ myself a stone illusion
and gloom fell heavy 'pon my heart and soul
an illumation in grayish blue tone of rigor light
like none of which I've seen before
yet facination overwhelmed me
as zig-zagged shadows danced in confusion
across my darken bedroom floor
'Oh, what fate would befall me, no clue had I
Nor could I fathom what evil shadows had taken control
On this eve of dark December,strange illusions danced free
 at the stroke of midnight plus one hour more
 

 

Reviews

[None]

You really captured the night in this prized poem of yours. All the words come together to make a unique performance. Your words: "facination overwhelmed me as zig-zagged shadows danced in confusion across my darken bedroom floor" really grabbed me!

[Ladysue]

I liked this, Fran, You said a lot in a short piece and you expressed it extremely well. Very well done!!

[nokturnal]

Such a great read I must say the feling of lonliness and solitude is what I get while reading this. Very well worded and put together I am looking forward to reading more of your work please keep me posted as you put anything new on here.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I dont know how you do this, Fran...but you manage to pack so much into such small spaces......I love your prose, and how you weave tales of love, loss, hope and such....

[Legion]

Hauntingly beautiful. Especially with that picture to compliment it. Worded brilliantly. Kudos. :)

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

what a beautiful piece of writing - -so nicely done --

[Dezaraye]

I like this very much. It's a very deep and beautiful piece.