Keep It Real

love poem

 

 

Keep it real my darling

       no hearts and flowers for me

              'tis but your sweet love,yes

                 which fills my ev'ry need

 

 

 

keep it real my dear

    don't show me false attitudes

                only sincere affections

                     makes my dreams come true

 

 

 

Keep it real honey

     let no lies fall from lover's  lips

                   give unto me your kisses

                           from which sweet honey drips

 

 

 

Keep it real babe

    in your heart,your mind and soul

               'tis when I'll give unto thee

                        the deepest part of me to behold

 

Reviews

[None]

There's nothing like the real deal! When we are surrounded by false pretenses, your poem displays the true meaning of love. Picking a few flowers from a garden while passing by is always tender! It's the special things close to the heart that matter, as you pointed out in this genuine, intimate poem.

[Brette Medb]

Keep it real... the true language of the heart.

Great write!


Brette

[Pema Dorje]

Keep it real and listen to the language of the Soul where only the Heart can hear, my Dear! ... well writ Fran a simple melody of the Heart is sung here ...

[Rain]

I love it. No false pretences..come as you are. It's a great way to say, you don't need the frills, and flowers society says should come on a certain day. Your words just said "Love me." Rain..

[SM Davis]

Keep it real babe

in your heart,mind and soul

'tis when I'll give to thee

the deepest part of me to behold



OH MY GOD YES!!!!!!! Oh to have such a connection. This was sublime!

[T. L. O'Neal]

Most romantic poems are a bit sappy but this one is realistic. No pretense and aware of all the pitfalls that can happen. Great write. T

[Fran Marie]

THanks for reading

[TL Boehm]

this is a lovely one. For all the keeping real - it is still a soft, romantic poem well written and articulate.

[Kim Kruger]

Fran, this is very nice. The rhythm is smooth and relaxed and the plea in this thought is very romantic.

[Sheila M]

That was beautiful. If only we all could find someone who keeps it real. Very nice poem.

[Dezaraye]

This is so beautiful and so romantic. Your words are soothing and so eloquently woven together. Very beautiful.