Keep It Real

love poem

 

 

Keep it real my darling

       no hearts and flowers for me

              'tis but your sweet love,yes

                 which fills my ev'ry need

 

 

 

keep it real my dear

    don't show me false attitudes

                only sincere affections

                     makes my dreams come true

 

 

 

Keep it real honey

     let no lies fall from lover's  lips

                   give unto me your kisses

                           from which sweet honey drips

 

 

 

Keep it real babe

    in your heart,your mind and soul

               'tis when I'll give unto thee

                        the deepest part of me to behold

 

Reviews

[None]

There's nothing like the real deal! When we are surrounded by false pretenses, your poem displays the true meaning of love. Picking a few flowers from a garden while passing by is always tender! It's the special things close to the heart that matter, as you pointed out in this genuine, intimate poem.

[Valentine]

How true..if it isn't real...don't even bother offering it..pain can be found anywhere..why does it have to be in a relationship too..Nice write,,God bless Valentine

[Emily B]

Keep it real! Real life, real love, real poetry.

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely and poignant write of romance and yearning. Excellent. ~Ev

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

It is beautiful .. the presentation is so nice..keeping it real is great advice and i think the best way to love a person.. no flase attitudes.. great advice... lovely poem!

Chloe
xoxo

[Ashton William F.]

It speaks of emotion and love un betold love that this feels like. All love and nothing facked its a great read i enjoyed it tremendously.

[Josh Clifton]

Beautiful representation of what it is to be one's self. How what matters is now how sweet we can talk or how much we can buy, but that the real key is being true to oneself and any they encounter, especially in love. Great write. I loved this one.

[Carrie Montgomery]

as usual I loved your poem...you have such an un-deniable talent. I enjoy your work very much. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season.

[None]

There's nothing like the real deal! When we are surrounded by false pretenses, your poem displays the true meaning of love. Picking a few flowers from a garden while passing by is always tender! It's the special things close to the heart that matter, as you pointed out in this genuine, intimate poem.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Oooo.... very good... it has a great flow (as usual) it's just an all around great poem...