Flame

 

 Like a moth to a flame

 

 in a moment I feel

 

 intense heat

 

your mystique of magic works

its spell on me

 

rendering me incapable  of

denying your charm

 

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat

 

little strength have I

to escape this trance

 

this magnetic force consumes

my total measure

 

and holds me captive

giving my all to you

 

willingly my heart takes love's chance

wrapped in your arms keeps me pleasantly tamed

 

no need to second guess love's pleasures

nor need for alarm

 

I'm spellbound by this flame

caught in lovelight's treasure

 

         in ectasy where I belong.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[None]

It's like you went inside my head and put my inner thoughts on paper! Someone makes me feel this way and there are several lines throughout your poem confirming this..
."your mystique of magic works it's spell on me / rendering me incapable of denying your charm / little strength have I to escape this trance / Willingly my heart takes love's chance"
What can I say, I adore the whole thing! This is an incredible poem about love and attraction.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

very beautiful piece of writing --

[Fran Marie]

THanks for reading

[Chiquita]

Words of passion. This flows well and causes beautiful thought to occur.

[Robert Luna]

The power in which your words allure like a flame bring me into a point I wanted to feel that heat that was so inspiring and could been sensed with a golden light of desire. I loved the way you wrote this making me feel as if I was bing drawn in deeper and deeper. You are always such an impressive writer being able to feel your words and not only read them.


Well Done!!!!!

[TAYLOR]

been drawn to the flame myself.....a wonderful poem such a gentle flow

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautiful love poem, Fran. Very compelling. i enjoyed reading this.


Great Write