Flame

 

 Like a moth to a flame

 

 in a moment I feel

 

 intense heat

 

your mystique of magic works

its spell on me

 

rendering me incapable  of

denying your charm

 

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat

 

little strength have I

to escape this trance

 

this magnetic force consumes

my total measure

 

and holds me captive

giving my all to you

 

willingly my heart takes love's chance

wrapped in your arms keeps me pleasantly tamed

 

no need to second guess love's pleasures

nor need for alarm

 

I'm spellbound by this flame

caught in lovelight's treasure

 

         in ectasy where I belong.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[None]

It's like you went inside my head and put my inner thoughts on paper! Someone makes me feel this way and there are several lines throughout your poem confirming this..
."your mystique of magic works it's spell on me / rendering me incapable of denying your charm / little strength have I to escape this trance / Willingly my heart takes love's chance"
What can I say, I adore the whole thing! This is an incredible poem about love and attraction.

[Brett Campaigne]

dont get burned.

[chr66is]

Very beautifully and simply stated, but elegant and powerful. Nice piece!
Peace,
Chris

[T. L. O'Neal]

That's the way love is sometimes. Very nice piece and wonderfully written. T

[Sheila M]

Very beautiful. I think I've been there before. Nicely written.

[Elise O'Haire]

Another beautiful one! The flow of this piece is great. I like the line "drawn to you as a moth to a flame". Perfect!

Elise O.

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

this is an awesome poem as usual. This has great flow and imagery.

[musegirlsm]

Another piece of romantic poetry. Your passionate writing is so beautiful...the images it brings are very sensual. The undeniable pull to someone is...delicious!

Great write!

sandra

[Pema Dorje]

ecstatic surrender drawn inescapably towards Loves destiny, with all ones Heart listening to the language of the Soul in silence drawn to the goal ...

lovely write Fran!

[George Love]

Great work, clear imagery and you held my attention through the entire work. Nice job!