Flame

 

 Like a moth to a flame

 

 in a moment I feel

 

 intense heat

 

your mystique of magic works

its spell on me

 

rendering me incapable  of

denying your charm

 

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat

 

little strength have I

to escape this trance

 

this magnetic force consumes

my total measure

 

and holds me captive

giving my all to you

 

willingly my heart takes love's chance

wrapped in your arms keeps me pleasantly tamed

 

no need to second guess love's pleasures

nor need for alarm

 

I'm spellbound by this flame

caught in lovelight's treasure

 

         in ectasy where I belong.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[None]

It's like you went inside my head and put my inner thoughts on paper! Someone makes me feel this way and there are several lines throughout your poem confirming this..
."your mystique of magic works it's spell on me / rendering me incapable of denying your charm / little strength have I to escape this trance / Willingly my heart takes love's chance"
What can I say, I adore the whole thing! This is an incredible poem about love and attraction.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

great job! I love this... Your wording is great and it has a wonderful flow!

[Roy]

You paint such a beautiful, sensual, passionate picture of submission and love. Excellent!

[Everett DeValle]

Enchanting write from the soul. Such yearning for a romance. Excellent take Fran.

[nokturnal]

A wonderful write exposing the feelings of love, I almost want to give it to my fiance cause it's how I feel when she just looks at me. I am never disappointed when it comes to your poems thanks for the read request keep sending them.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh to be caught in the magic of love's embrace... you did great in capturing that feeling.

[Emily B]

Aw, this made me all warm and toast just thinking about it. My man's off playing poker with the Morgan's men tonight. May have to read this before I turn in to keep my warm. ;-)

[Ryan]

...that was amazing... the use of words ... and where you placed them was almost like your poem was a puzzle containing all of your feelings.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Fran, such a beautifully sensual and romantic poem.
This is a poem of true love and desire .. very good.

Chloe
xoxo

[SM Davis]

rendering me incapable of denying your charm
my composure slips into compelling defeat

LOVED THAT!!! That sort of defeat is indeed compelling. Hope to find it one day...Thanks Fran.

[TL Boehm]

in ecstasy where I belong. A profound thought. We all look for this. Well written.