Flame

 

 Like a moth to a flame

 

 in a moment I feel

 

 intense heat

 

your mystique of magic works

its spell on me

 

rendering me incapable  of

denying your charm

 

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat

 

little strength have I

to escape this trance

 

this magnetic force consumes

my total measure

 

and holds me captive

giving my all to you

 

willingly my heart takes love's chance

wrapped in your arms keeps me pleasantly tamed

 

no need to second guess love's pleasures

nor need for alarm

 

I'm spellbound by this flame

caught in lovelight's treasure

 

         in ectasy where I belong.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[None]

It's like you went inside my head and put my inner thoughts on paper! Someone makes me feel this way and there are several lines throughout your poem confirming this..
."your mystique of magic works it's spell on me / rendering me incapable of denying your charm / little strength have I to escape this trance / Willingly my heart takes love's chance"
What can I say, I adore the whole thing! This is an incredible poem about love and attraction.

[Ama May Cooper]

This is pure beauty ... i actually am lost for words what a beautiful piece of work x

[Brianna Brie]

Beautifully put...nothing like the flame!

[Sheila Kline]

A mesmerizing write of love with enchantment written all over it!
It is quite captivating, and the format you have used is really nice!

[Tas]

nice...it has a really good flow

[---]

Oh my goodness...one of the best poems i've read!! I love how you put the seperations in the writing...it makes it myseterious in a way. GREAT JOB!!

Thanks for entering!

~Phoenix~

[DanaRegen]

this is truly a mistic and amazing poem about the "flame of love", great poem :)

[fallendemonofmercy]

the sweet, intriguing mystique of love

[Candle in the wind]

yes, my composure slips into

compelling defeat...the very essence of surrender, all I can say is that every word is felt on the pulse!

[L.G. Knight]

Well Done My Friend VERY Well Done!

~Frances~

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Ilov he dark flavor of ths oe.
Ver nice.

Dave