Springtime Rain

 

Warm
breezes
fresh wet scents
of springtime rain
makes me tingle. Yes,
your love trips my senses
waking them, my life renewed
pleasured by your fiery kiss
kissing my wanton lips,taps my soul.
So warming that loving you is easy.

 

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

Twitterpated!! Remember Bambi and the fellas in the spring? Love was in the air, it was everywhere....Plus, that's just a cool word to say, I think....

I love the animated pic you chose as well....spring rains are great....I cant wait till winter is over....

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I really like this piece... I love the picture too... have to love the rain... it's my favorite thing ever... especially the smell..... Great Write!

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I love the picture that goes along with this its fits perfectly..
"Yes,
your love trips my senses
waking them"

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

This one let me warm, fuzzy and in need of a steamy cup of hot chocolate with tose littel marshmellos on top.

Lovely

Dave

[Fran Marie]

THanks so much

[Roy]

Lovely mix of springtime rain, romance and passion. I feel it building, expanding, blossoming.

"kissing my wanton lips taps my soul." ahhhh the deepest of love..right to the soul...

magnifique!

[Pema Dorje]

a warm Poem with a fascinating picture above to add the cozy inside feeling looking out ... I can see it all Fran with these few choice words you've captured a peaceful moment of togetherness ...

[SM Davis]

I love the rain. You've created a warmth inside this tastefully romantic read. Very well done!

[Michael X]

wow, so very soft and takes ones breath, in regards to the continious
whsipering tone of beauty, romantical ambience, love the metaphorical
desriptiveness, the graphic, everything about this work of heart and
passion is exquisite, fran this has a wonderful design describing springtime love, mike

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

For a short poem it says alot. Nicely done. very romantic.


Great Write.