Dawn

 Dawn

A
new dawn 
breaks and once again
I am here with you love.
you arouse all my senses.
awaken my spirit to new heights
I'm so captivated by the intoxicating
scent of love as I breathe you in and when
you pull me into your body heat, I'm so high
your hands touching me,making all the right moves
It's so warming,not just to the body,oh,no it's more
than that my darling~ it's your soul and mind I love.


 

 

Reviews

[T. L. O'Neal]

This was a sensual piece but I lie the fact that you're in love with the mind and soul as well. That's true love. T

[Tricessimus]

The dawn breaks narrow, a single letter, then rousing and awakening as light spreads until the heat is high with body, soul, and mind bared under the warm glow. Pairing the visual form with passionate words that evoke the warming caress of the rising sun is a very artistic touch. I liked it and junk.

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

nice one

[Marie]

Great job, Fran.

[SM Davis]

Once again Fran this is so very indicative of your talent not just as a writer, but a painter of words. This is really exquisite.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

The soul and the mind....thats great writing right there, and it shows that this love is deeper than just appearances...and that's the best kind of love to share with another...

[Sean M. Addams]

love the emotion that you put into this ... very heartfelt ... nice flow and imagery great job.

[George Love]

A rather romantic and sensuous work, simple, elegant and stylish. Nicely done.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A romantic and sensuous write. Thanks for sharing. Debileah

[Barry S. Maltese]

Written with passion, yet taste. Your description of your tantilized senses comes across not only clearly, but in a very entertaining manner. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Beautifully written, and so true, an experience of mind, body and soul as one. This is very sensual and sweet, a pleasure to read. I enjoyed it. Thank you!

Thanks for reading and leaving a review on "Midnight's Misery," I really appreciate your time. I apologize that it took me so long to return the favor. Much thanks ...