^Psychic^

Psychic

Views
visions
of slayings
violence, death
bloodied knifed corpses
she sees it with her mind's
eye of a tragedy, yet
to unfold. A Psychic witness
to weird murders; sensitive always
with eyes on the threshold of tragedies

 

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

wonderfully done...as someone whose worst dreams sometimes fortell of tragedy I can relate...which is why when I got to the last line...I was sure it was going to end "on the threshold of madness". Was relieved to see tragedies there which may sound odd, but it gives me hope for my own sanity. awesome job.

laura

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

An intresting piece very well written!! Great job Fran!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Interesting subject. Great Write.

[Emily B]

a sensational write. would make a great Halloween movie.

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, I really dug this piece. Maybe it's the fact that I'm a huge horror movie buff. Or maybe that I love Ghost Whisper and such... LOL. Either way, this was awesome to read.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I like the format of this poem... The triangle is cool.... Great job!

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

good work! :)

[Yvonne Heidt]

Wow - I loved the set-up on this with the picture - it flowed perfect. Great job!

[Lori]

Terrific subject here. I haven't seen it covered by a poet before. The shape of the poem is very stark that matches the subject, and you used very few verbs and turned many of them into nouns, which really is a great touch, because it must be how the psychic feels -- not in the action, just witnessing the pictures -- helpless. Fine work!