^Psychic^

Psychic

Views
visions
of slayings
violence, death
bloodied knifed corpses
she sees it with her mind's
eye of a tragedy, yet
to unfold. A Psychic witness
to weird murders; sensitive always
with eyes on the threshold of tragedies

 

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

wonderfully done...as someone whose worst dreams sometimes fortell of tragedy I can relate...which is why when I got to the last line...I was sure it was going to end "on the threshold of madness". Was relieved to see tragedies there which may sound odd, but it gives me hope for my own sanity. awesome job.

laura

[Lyn Anderson]

I like the story of this as well as its form.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you K.L.

[ATG]

Short, simple, and very good. The poem was very clear on what you were trying to say. Overall, it is a very well written, but there I do want to mention one thing.

"she sees it with her mind's
eye of a tragedy, yet"

The second line seems out of place. The entire poem builds up in not only the words, but how they are placed in the poem. The lines get longer as you progress in the poem until you reach that part where it goes backwards. I do not know if that was intentional or not. If so, good job. If not, I would suggest keeping it in. It really emphasized the ability to see into the future. Overall, a great poem.

[.]

short and powerful, how awful to see all those things...

[Ruth]

Potent poem love! Prophetic? Interesting and well voiced!
xx

[Ravenskald]

thankyou for your entry
you've use the form to explosive "scariness"
I know thats the wrong word , but I love the move from almost standstill
to breathless finish wih this piece of writing !

R

[Story Keeper]

I like the format. It was short, but profound and well written.

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

I love topics of this nature

[PoemRodent]

Fran excellent view a bit narrow but none the less I can appreciate it. As for the below review...
Wow, I guess I never wrote much on the subject LOL

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Reminds me of that old movie The Eyes of Laura Mars... dark and erie piece, love it!!