Path of Love

Path of Love

A Poem by Fran Marie

Path Of Love
 

It's not where you start.
nor is it how you begin.
The one thing it is
Is feelings from within.

It's not how far you go.
nor the way you get there.
but the one thing I know.
you must travel it with care.

It's not too steady at times
and can be a slippery slide indeed,
And it's not an easy climb
back to the top
where your heart won't bleed.

Yes,it's not a lot of things
but this is one that's true.
'Tis the path of love
not to be abused.

© 2008 Fran Marie


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Love the rhyming effort here and the format woked really well too.

Great job.

Dave

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THanks for reading

Posted 16 Years Ago


Fran, your thoughts are passionately transposing,
pondering what is the gentle enigmatic quality of
Love, depthfully descriptive, expertly portraying
a vsion intellectual in essence by metaphorically
analyzing how to walk the path with care, much peace, mike

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I wasn't expecting that!! It felt fun and whimsical and then whammy you hit us with a very strong message at the end. Very well done! Liked it a lot.


Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful words of wisdom, my friend!
Sandra♥

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2008

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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