Bella Sera

 

 

Sparkling glow shone from above 
   upon two souls entwined in love,
         and beneath a milky moon 
              their song sang love's sweet tune.

A beautiful evening,or so it would seem, 
    for sealing this love and fullfilling their dream. 
       a starlit night, perchance a dream could be made. 
                        Tho~ sad it is, even stars sometimes fade.

For fate turns a cruel hand 
         on dreams sometime,
               and steers away, love sublime

 

A once beautiful evening  turns cold and grey. 
          the stars grow dim 
                         and simply fade away. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sparkling glow shone from above
upon two souls entwined in love,
and 'neath a milky moon
their song sang love's sweet tune.

Perfect poem! There is just something about it. Perhaps the way it all fits together. So flowery, poetic, rhymes well and with much emotion. It leaves me with a feeling of longing mixed with sadness. I just had to add it to my library, because just what if I never read it again.

[PoemRodent]

This is a very well penned and flowing piece. You done well and show deeply the feelings involved.

Dostani bows

[J. Hampton]

Enchanting.....

darkly romantic

"For fate turns a cruel hand
on dreams sometime,
and steers away, love sublime"

Like that verse.......
One never knows what slipper will turn up "glass" by morning

Nice write

Blessssssssssss

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I sense this to be a sad one, but beautifully written. Great Write.

[Amor-de-angel]

Beautifully penned piece. Though it had a sad tone to it.

[Blue Bard]

Your rhymes are good, unforced and that is no mean feat. I like the dreaminess of the peace. It has a very understated sensuality that makes it all the more interesting.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A very sorrowful feel this piece has to it.....A great write Fran!!!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A sad and beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. debileah

[julian3]

Sorrow hangs over this song of silent parting as a heavy cloud overhangs a deserted playground.
Well done.