Bella Sera

 

 

Sparkling glow shone from above 
   upon two souls entwined in love,
         and beneath a milky moon 
              their song sang love's sweet tune.

A beautiful evening,or so it would seem, 
    for sealing this love and fullfilling their dream. 
       a starlit night, perchance a dream could be made. 
                        Tho~ sad it is, even stars sometimes fade.

For fate turns a cruel hand 
         on dreams sometime,
               and steers away, love sublime

 

A once beautiful evening  turns cold and grey. 
          the stars grow dim 
                         and simply fade away. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sparkling glow shone from above
upon two souls entwined in love,
and 'neath a milky moon
their song sang love's sweet tune.

Perfect poem! There is just something about it. Perhaps the way it all fits together. So flowery, poetic, rhymes well and with much emotion. It leaves me with a feeling of longing mixed with sadness. I just had to add it to my library, because just what if I never read it again.

[Klyn]

I love the way you write. Wonderful!

[Dead Angel]

very sad ending to a beautifully written poem. i love how you use old english in your poems, that's very creative. well done! :)

[Greg the Bard]

I find this a sad ending to a uplifting start. The stype and font are wonderful. The flow gives meirt to the ending and manitains the structure. However sad I find it it is still a great write and wonderful read.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

So uplifting and beautiful then fading into loneliness. Very nice, subtle write with so few words. Well done.
Thank you for sharing,
Siddartha

[Emily B]

Lovely . . . restful and lovely. I enjoyed it very much.

[Valentine]

WOW...I think this is one of your better ones..I loved it..God bless Valentine

[BrightEyes]

what a beautiful way to express the sad and tragic ending to love. just quietly fading away...this reads almost like a dream....more on a surreal level...very nice indeed.

laura

[Pema Dorje]

Change is the Art and Science of Nature, roiling with incessant urges to sparkle in a new way or for a brief instant become amazed at it's Beautiful moment, yet lingers not as She is vast and pregnant with Loves many children to come ...

lovely Poetry, Fran Marie

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow, I really like this poem... I like your imagery... Very good poem...
"A once beautiful evening
turns cold and grey.
and the stars grow dim
and simply fade away." I love this stanza!! Thanks for sharing :D

[desertraven]

whimsical and airey. Wonderful write!
Sandra♥