Bella Sera

 

 

Sparkling glow shone from above 
   upon two souls entwined in love,
         and beneath a milky moon 
              their song sang love's sweet tune.

A beautiful evening,or so it would seem, 
    for sealing this love and fullfilling their dream. 
       a starlit night, perchance a dream could be made. 
                        Tho~ sad it is, even stars sometimes fade.

For fate turns a cruel hand 
         on dreams sometime,
               and steers away, love sublime

 

A once beautiful evening  turns cold and grey. 
          the stars grow dim 
                         and simply fade away. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sparkling glow shone from above
upon two souls entwined in love,
and 'neath a milky moon
their song sang love's sweet tune.

Perfect poem! There is just something about it. Perhaps the way it all fits together. So flowery, poetic, rhymes well and with much emotion. It leaves me with a feeling of longing mixed with sadness. I just had to add it to my library, because just what if I never read it again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wowo what a turn but then again that can be life itself.. one minute thing are going smoothly then your world falls a part. Love it!!

[Alba T.]

So beautiful and then so sad
such is life,
I liked this poem very much.
Alba

[Brette Medb]

This started out so wonderful and then it dropped off to cruel... the way life sometimes is..great write.



Brette

[TL Boehm]

I hate it when relationships are victims of 'hit and run' love....that does not stay. Beautifully stated piece on love passing by....

[ForgottenSoldier]

Great job Fran ^^

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

very beautiful! great write! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, what a change takes place in this one, Fran. A metamorphosis of the heart. Beautifully written...as always. Lydia

[Michael X]

fran i love how you sculpted this embracing
romantic, enchanting render characterizing
the amorous sparkle gleaming as an essence
unifying two souls, stargazing contemplation,
sweet & gentle, Brilliant, pure poetry, much peace. mike