Bella Sera

 

 

Sparkling glow shone from above 
   upon two souls entwined in love,
         and beneath a milky moon 
              their song sang love's sweet tune.

A beautiful evening,or so it would seem, 
    for sealing this love and fullfilling their dream. 
       a starlit night, perchance a dream could be made. 
                        Tho~ sad it is, even stars sometimes fade.

For fate turns a cruel hand 
         on dreams sometime,
               and steers away, love sublime

 

A once beautiful evening  turns cold and grey. 
          the stars grow dim 
                         and simply fade away. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sparkling glow shone from above
upon two souls entwined in love,
and 'neath a milky moon
their song sang love's sweet tune.

Perfect poem! There is just something about it. Perhaps the way it all fits together. So flowery, poetic, rhymes well and with much emotion. It leaves me with a feeling of longing mixed with sadness. I just had to add it to my library, because just what if I never read it again.

[T.k. Sutter]

Beautiful and sad. I love the way you've been using these lovely fonts to emphasize the beauty of your work. A great piece.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

this is such a beautiful piece of writing... truly wonderful.

[Buffi]

Impeccable writing. Truly "old school".

[~ Tex]

Perfectly unfolded, beautiful imagery and flow in this vividly descriptive work of art and display of passion.

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WoW! This was definitely beautiful!! I really liked the gentle flow of your words here. I agree with Alba as well. Brilliant indeed!

Mikey

[Harlequin]

beautiful poem, you have a very elegant way of writing.

[Kristin Brecoe]

aww. this is such a sweet poem. there is just so uch to it. beautiful.
my only suggestion would be to type the word beneath instead of just neath. it kinda of through me off because it messed with the rhythm. the rest was nicely written though.

[Carrie Montgomery]

oh my...how touching, how true! Life does often fade as does love. This was yet another wonderful poem.

[All faded blue]

Lovely lines!

[R J Askew]

sad truth in this there is. well sung.