Bella Sera

 

 

Sparkling glow shone from above 
   upon two souls entwined in love,
         and beneath a milky moon 
              their song sang love's sweet tune.

A beautiful evening,or so it would seem, 
    for sealing this love and fullfilling their dream. 
       a starlit night, perchance a dream could be made. 
                        Tho~ sad it is, even stars sometimes fade.

For fate turns a cruel hand 
         on dreams sometime,
               and steers away, love sublime

 

A once beautiful evening  turns cold and grey. 
          the stars grow dim 
                         and simply fade away. 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sparkling glow shone from above
upon two souls entwined in love,
and 'neath a milky moon
their song sang love's sweet tune.

Perfect poem! There is just something about it. Perhaps the way it all fits together. So flowery, poetic, rhymes well and with much emotion. It leaves me with a feeling of longing mixed with sadness. I just had to add it to my library, because just what if I never read it again.

I love this pome! It's gorgeous!!

[Star Wolf]

Very beautiful and very tragic. There's a whole story in this of lovers finding each other and that love lost.

[Aria]

Awww, i don't like this, it made me sad. lol. I do like it. It's very sweet and has smart insight. You use simple descriptions that make an enourmous impact on the reader. And yes, stars do fade away but, I still think that love outlives anything. :)

[Edmond Dantes]

allll, so sad talking of stars fading away. i know it happens! but at least let me see it happen! that would be a sight. haha. great little write , kudos! thanks for sharing.

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Bella Sera sounds like one of them African bourne diseases doesn't it? I can see Morgan Freeman asking how the lab rats are doing producing the "Bella Sera Serum."

[Dawnkain]

beautiful, once again you have created a lovely poem

[Jadarae]

Beautiful piece.

[Hendrix]

A very nice peice

[M Lamont]

Wow, what a beautiful piece here. It turns sad at the end but it an odd way it feels like it should. Nice job!